While not bad, it's a bit underwhelming. And short. And easy. While it's meant for 4th level characters, they don't face any opposition worse than 3 HD monsters, save at the very end and then only facing 5th level opponent. There's also not much in the way of loot
What is sort of interesting is the motivation of the villainess — she's kidnapping people so as to implant them with mind control devices to ensure world peace. I'm not sure how doing that to mayors in a fantasy setting will do that, but it's something different.
While I realize his adventures are meant to be short, easy to play one shots that can be played online with VTT software, this seems to be an average at best effort from him, falling well short of his similar, but excellent Lunar Library